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The Energy Within

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i. adore. this! :iconamazingplz:

this is i sware one of the pictures that i am the most proud of! ^w^

this is the hair color that im changing it two. (its more maroon/crimson now) plus im also debating if she should have this outfit insted of the other one (ill tweek this one if i choose it, add stuff like gadgets onto it xD)

SQUEE!~ :iconeeeeeplz::squee:

hope you all like it too :D

Miink (c) me :meow:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

i write critique :3

OK, to begin, i like how it looks overall, the facial expression is good (it matches with the pose) and the posing is good

the things i think you could use work on at times are your dimension properties, her right arm looks like it could be a bit more out to the side so it looks a bit 3rd dimensional l, the tear markings on her pants look kinda flat (like their pressed tightly against her leg) I'd suggest adding some perspective to them, I'm not fully sure if the blue stuff around her is the background or an aura surrounding her but if its the aura then I'd suggest not making it look like straight lines, make it kinda misty lookin (like how you made the purple mist around her hands) :3

anyway, that's what i think could use some work, the drawing is great overall, i really like it, those are just the things i think you could work on. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>